Post by Burningstar on Apr 6, 2009 15:21:02 GMT -7
Name- Burningstar
Age- 60 stars
Previous Names- Burningkit, Burningpaw, Burningheart, Burningstar
Gender- Male
Clan- NightClan
Rank- Leader
Extra- None
Appearance- This cat has dark yellow eyes and a
red pelt. On this red pelt are black stripes running down his back horizantilly and they stop at the tip of his long tail. The black stripes sparkle. He has an average built body but his legs are strong and with those strong legs are average sized paws. He has a scar that goes just above the tip of his right eye and then another scar that goes from the bottom of his eyes to his top whisker. His teeth are sharp and so are his claws making him good with clawing and biteing targets.
Personality- This cat is quiet at times and lets actions do his talking but most of the times he will be talkitive as much as he was as a kit. He is stubborn though and like mostr cats when his mind is made up it takes a lot to change it. Earning his trust is fairly easy and that gets him in trouble sometimes like it got him in trouble in the past, but if you lose it, getting it back is not an easy task. He will listen to his clan almost all the time but soemtimes he has to make decisions for himself whether then clan likes it or not. When he is thinking he likes silence. Overall though Burningstar is a good friend and a good cat.
History-
Kit- He was born in the clan and had a brother. Him and his brothers used to always talk about going outside into the forest and seeing the outside world for what it truly was. That is exactly what they did one night. They crept out of the nursery and had their own little adventure. They didn't expect to get lost though. Burningkit's older brother got stuck in a small ditch in the ground and couldn't get up. Burningkit had to help and so he stuck out a paw hoping to help his brother get out. Unfortuantly he fell in the ditch too and not only were they cramped but they had no food. They soon grew hungry. Luckily after about 4 hours a patrol who wa slooking for them found them. They wer ebought home saftely and they never went out into the forest as kits again....
Apprentice- When he became an apprentice it was great day for him. He liked the way everyone congradulated him and he liked his mentor. Son when he and his mentor went out for his first hunt. Burningpaw was lucky enough to catch his first prey quickly. It was then that he mentor knew that even if he lacked in strength, he would make up for that in speed. His mentor taught him many speed battle and hunting moves. Not many thigns happened in his apprenticeship. he lived a pretty normal life during this part.
Warrior- He had proven himself worthy and he knew it. Even his mentor had told him so. He bacame a warrior and so his warrior name was given, Burningpelt. He likied the name and he couldn't help but smile all the first day he was a warrior. He did as he was told and one day he had it. His first real battle...It was against a loner. The loner had been tresspassing on their territory and when Burningpelt had asked it nicely to get off its territory and go back to where it came form it refused and so Burningpelt knew he had to defend his territory with tooth and claw. When he made the loner retreat the loner told Burningpelt that this wasn't over and that he would be back. The loner was telling the truth...
Deputy- Burningpelt had done good as a warrior and when the old leader died the deputy for that time was raised up to leader. Nobody expected for Burningpelt to be choosen as new deputy but he was. The new leader said that he had saw all that Burningpelt had doen for the clan, all his protection and loyalty for the clan. That was why he was made deputy. Not to long after deputy tragedy struck for Burningpelt. He was with his old mentor out hunting. The loner came back just like he had promised but this time, he had brought backup. Three other cats were with him and Burningpelt knew they should retreat but the confidence in him said no! Him and his mentor fought these cats. The final part of the battle was when Burningpelt was pushed to the side by the othe three and his mentor was killed infront of his eyes. Burningpelt had found the new rage in him and he pushed the three cats off of him and fought the loner leader by himself. Burningpelt ended up winning by killing the loner leader and making the other retreat but the cost was that he got to scratches. One that went from right above his eye for about a centimeter. Another was at the bottom of his eyes and went down to his top whsiker. Those loners were never seen anywhere near Nightclan again...
Leader- He went on to doing his duties as deputy and then one day an epidemic of greencough broke out. The leader had it and Burningpelts mom got it. Luckily the medicine cat helped no other cats get it. Unfortuanatly the leader and Burningpelt's mother were treated to late and they both died. Burningpelt was now Burningstar. everythign seemed to move slower in the clan now and he appointed a new deputy soon. Burningstar still remembers and misses his mother to this day. His mother had raised him well and she knew that she had. Burningstar knows that his mom roams in Stardust now but he still feels the pain and agony from losing her. He knows that she is still watching him to this day and he will never forget it...
Roleplay Example- A cat with a red pelt and black stripes that went from his back to the tip of his tail horizantily sat in the branches of one of the many trees in the Night Forest. This cat was none other then Burningstar, leader of Nightclan. Why was he out in the forest like that? Nobody could really tell if they didn't know this cat. Burningstar just sat on the branch and looked up at the stars. In Burningstars mind he could see his mom up there. he then looked at the ground. he missed her so much but he didn't have time to greive now. He knew his mom didn't want him to greive over her. he would want him to keep going in life and remember the good times because she would still be watching him everyday. Burningstar knew that was what she wanted but he couldn't help to feel oain in his heart. He then glanced aorund with his dark yellow eyes and opened his mouth halfway to see if there was any unfimilar scent nearby right now. No there wasn't so he hopped off of the branch and landed softly on the ground.
Burningstar then padded across the forest as he headed back to his clans camp. they would probably want to know why he was out so late like this and he knew a few of them knew why. he decided that he might as well make himself useful and get some prey to put in the freshkill pill so he slowly crept up on a bird that was walking along the path. Some cats that were not in Nightclan probably wouldn't be able to see it in this darkness. He got down in the hunters crouch and leaped at it. With one swipe of a paw the bird was killed and Burningstar picked it up with his jaws letting it dangle. There then was a movement that he saw out of the corner of his eye. He dropped the bird to open his mouth to pick up a scent. It was Nightclan but who could it be out here at this time of night. He soon saw _____________ step out into the open but Burningstar still sayed nothing. He was wiating on the other cat to say or do something....
Age- 60 stars
Previous Names- Burningkit, Burningpaw, Burningheart, Burningstar
Gender- Male
Clan- NightClan
Rank- Leader
Extra- None
Appearance- This cat has dark yellow eyes and a
red pelt. On this red pelt are black stripes running down his back horizantilly and they stop at the tip of his long tail. The black stripes sparkle. He has an average built body but his legs are strong and with those strong legs are average sized paws. He has a scar that goes just above the tip of his right eye and then another scar that goes from the bottom of his eyes to his top whisker. His teeth are sharp and so are his claws making him good with clawing and biteing targets.
Personality- This cat is quiet at times and lets actions do his talking but most of the times he will be talkitive as much as he was as a kit. He is stubborn though and like mostr cats when his mind is made up it takes a lot to change it. Earning his trust is fairly easy and that gets him in trouble sometimes like it got him in trouble in the past, but if you lose it, getting it back is not an easy task. He will listen to his clan almost all the time but soemtimes he has to make decisions for himself whether then clan likes it or not. When he is thinking he likes silence. Overall though Burningstar is a good friend and a good cat.
History-
Kit- He was born in the clan and had a brother. Him and his brothers used to always talk about going outside into the forest and seeing the outside world for what it truly was. That is exactly what they did one night. They crept out of the nursery and had their own little adventure. They didn't expect to get lost though. Burningkit's older brother got stuck in a small ditch in the ground and couldn't get up. Burningkit had to help and so he stuck out a paw hoping to help his brother get out. Unfortuantly he fell in the ditch too and not only were they cramped but they had no food. They soon grew hungry. Luckily after about 4 hours a patrol who wa slooking for them found them. They wer ebought home saftely and they never went out into the forest as kits again....
Apprentice- When he became an apprentice it was great day for him. He liked the way everyone congradulated him and he liked his mentor. Son when he and his mentor went out for his first hunt. Burningpaw was lucky enough to catch his first prey quickly. It was then that he mentor knew that even if he lacked in strength, he would make up for that in speed. His mentor taught him many speed battle and hunting moves. Not many thigns happened in his apprenticeship. he lived a pretty normal life during this part.
Warrior- He had proven himself worthy and he knew it. Even his mentor had told him so. He bacame a warrior and so his warrior name was given, Burningpelt. He likied the name and he couldn't help but smile all the first day he was a warrior. He did as he was told and one day he had it. His first real battle...It was against a loner. The loner had been tresspassing on their territory and when Burningpelt had asked it nicely to get off its territory and go back to where it came form it refused and so Burningpelt knew he had to defend his territory with tooth and claw. When he made the loner retreat the loner told Burningpelt that this wasn't over and that he would be back. The loner was telling the truth...
Deputy- Burningpelt had done good as a warrior and when the old leader died the deputy for that time was raised up to leader. Nobody expected for Burningpelt to be choosen as new deputy but he was. The new leader said that he had saw all that Burningpelt had doen for the clan, all his protection and loyalty for the clan. That was why he was made deputy. Not to long after deputy tragedy struck for Burningpelt. He was with his old mentor out hunting. The loner came back just like he had promised but this time, he had brought backup. Three other cats were with him and Burningpelt knew they should retreat but the confidence in him said no! Him and his mentor fought these cats. The final part of the battle was when Burningpelt was pushed to the side by the othe three and his mentor was killed infront of his eyes. Burningpelt had found the new rage in him and he pushed the three cats off of him and fought the loner leader by himself. Burningpelt ended up winning by killing the loner leader and making the other retreat but the cost was that he got to scratches. One that went from right above his eye for about a centimeter. Another was at the bottom of his eyes and went down to his top whsiker. Those loners were never seen anywhere near Nightclan again...
Leader- He went on to doing his duties as deputy and then one day an epidemic of greencough broke out. The leader had it and Burningpelts mom got it. Luckily the medicine cat helped no other cats get it. Unfortuanatly the leader and Burningpelt's mother were treated to late and they both died. Burningpelt was now Burningstar. everythign seemed to move slower in the clan now and he appointed a new deputy soon. Burningstar still remembers and misses his mother to this day. His mother had raised him well and she knew that she had. Burningstar knows that his mom roams in Stardust now but he still feels the pain and agony from losing her. He knows that she is still watching him to this day and he will never forget it...
Roleplay Example- A cat with a red pelt and black stripes that went from his back to the tip of his tail horizantily sat in the branches of one of the many trees in the Night Forest. This cat was none other then Burningstar, leader of Nightclan. Why was he out in the forest like that? Nobody could really tell if they didn't know this cat. Burningstar just sat on the branch and looked up at the stars. In Burningstars mind he could see his mom up there. he then looked at the ground. he missed her so much but he didn't have time to greive now. He knew his mom didn't want him to greive over her. he would want him to keep going in life and remember the good times because she would still be watching him everyday. Burningstar knew that was what she wanted but he couldn't help to feel oain in his heart. He then glanced aorund with his dark yellow eyes and opened his mouth halfway to see if there was any unfimilar scent nearby right now. No there wasn't so he hopped off of the branch and landed softly on the ground.
Burningstar then padded across the forest as he headed back to his clans camp. they would probably want to know why he was out so late like this and he knew a few of them knew why. he decided that he might as well make himself useful and get some prey to put in the freshkill pill so he slowly crept up on a bird that was walking along the path. Some cats that were not in Nightclan probably wouldn't be able to see it in this darkness. He got down in the hunters crouch and leaped at it. With one swipe of a paw the bird was killed and Burningstar picked it up with his jaws letting it dangle. There then was a movement that he saw out of the corner of his eye. He dropped the bird to open his mouth to pick up a scent. It was Nightclan but who could it be out here at this time of night. He soon saw _____________ step out into the open but Burningstar still sayed nothing. He was wiating on the other cat to say or do something....
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